Wednesday, December 3, 2008

Note: BUG

I went through and did some revision on BUG. I took one suggestion to cut out a bunch of words, and took other suggestions to fill out the ending better. Take another look and let me know what you think! Thanks! *grin*

1 comment:

Cristina said...

I have to say that the new ending is quite a bit better than the old one :-) I really love this story.