I went through and did some revision on BUG. I took one suggestion to cut out a bunch of words, and took other suggestions to fill out the ending better. Take another look and let me know what you think! Thanks! *grin*
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I have to say that the new ending is quite a bit better than the old one :-) I really love this story.
I have always wanted to be a writer (haven't we all?), but I woke up this morning and realized something: either I can spend my whole life wanting to be a writer, or I can be a writer. This blog is my beginning. My plan is to use writing prompts, and write something here--every day, for one year. I am counting on people leaving comments so that I can improve and learn. (Although if you're my close family or friends, you might want to comment anonymously so I don't call you bawling and asking why you hated it. *grin*) Thank you for reading...
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I have to say that the new ending is quite a bit better than the old one :-) I really love this story.
Cristina
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