tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1838442434184474812.post9097475296924215386..comments2023-07-20T03:59:35.959-04:00Comments on The Little Author That Could: Question...Beccahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04003367723852198095noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1838442434184474812.post-46209657496835785502008-12-24T00:07:00.000-05:002008-12-24T00:07:00.000-05:00Ah! So many comments, so little time!! First off,...Ah! So many comments, so little time!! First off, congratulations- you've made it through a month solid- I have a feeling that some needed sleep was sacrificed in the process. I liked "The Star" as revised- flowed easily in third person. In the way of critique-ing...on occasion you will come out with a sentence that is a little tangled- I read, go back, read again, and move on. A good example is Joseph getting his goods together to head on out for the night. Is it sentence stucture, punctuation, or something else? Re-read that part- I am sure you will see what I'm trying to say. I found your engagement story interesting- time adds perspective like nothing else. I am so very happy that your real prince charming was straight ahead. As you asked- looking back at a month's worth of entries, "Death" stands out as most personal,( I could feel your sorrow), I loved the Tupperware cupboard- this style of writing from you delights and amuses me- and I remember the vivid descriptions of the scene in the pioneer one (sorry, can't remember the name of that one.) Keep going- if you can stand to loose the sleep!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1838442434184474812.post-22992172077165301902008-12-20T23:35:00.000-05:002008-12-20T23:35:00.000-05:00I agree with Stephanie ... you have mentioned bits...I agree with Stephanie ... you have mentioned bits and pieces of other personal events that you say "Thats for an entirely different story/entry". I like reading the more "real life" stories you write ...Torihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13721535399699232613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1838442434184474812.post-53660342134175708622008-12-20T12:36:00.000-05:002008-12-20T12:36:00.000-05:00Maybe it's just me, but I want to hear the rest of...Maybe it's just me, but I want to hear the rest of your personally stories that you've only alluded to. :)Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486223394459963669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1838442434184474812.post-66006676371491704332008-12-20T08:56:00.000-05:002008-12-20T08:56:00.000-05:00I really enjoyed the entry about the Christmas Car...I really enjoyed the entry about the Christmas Card. It's funny and realistic and I'm sure people (not me, necessarily) can and do relate to it. <BR/>I'm sure the antics of this young family are no where near over. It's not even Christmas yet. :)Brycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10286409765521023543noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1838442434184474812.post-77677270219464361582008-12-20T03:19:00.000-05:002008-12-20T03:19:00.000-05:00Hi Becca,I would love to see the shepherd post red...Hi Becca,<BR/><BR/>I would love to see the shepherd post redone :-)<BR/><BR/>CristinaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com