tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1838442434184474812.post486479585213541246..comments2023-07-20T03:59:35.959-04:00Comments on The Little Author That Could: Day 28: EconomyBeccahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04003367723852198095noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1838442434184474812.post-43203002068561534972008-12-20T11:49:00.000-05:002008-12-20T11:49:00.000-05:00I like it. Depending on the age of the narrator, ...I like it. Depending on the age of the narrator, he/she may be a little too "educated"/reflective, but the concept is cool.Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486223394459963669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1838442434184474812.post-42473580604144142972008-12-19T15:09:00.000-05:002008-12-19T15:09:00.000-05:00Loved it! I thought it was very good and I'm now c...Loved it! I thought it was very good and I'm now curious how it continues :-) Will you write more?<BR/><BR/>CristinaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1838442434184474812.post-81235522351638311302008-12-19T08:36:00.000-05:002008-12-19T08:36:00.000-05:00Very good idea. It does seem different from what y...Very good idea. It does seem different from what you normally write, but that doesn't mean it's bad. Stretch yourself. I always find it fascinating to imagine a "fallen" future. Scenarios like that, in my opinion, always seem to make good stories.Brycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10286409765521023543noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1838442434184474812.post-89079566655085772802008-12-19T01:35:00.000-05:002008-12-19T01:35:00.000-05:00Scary is a good description- we hide in sincerely ...Scary is a good description- we hide in sincerely believing that that sort of thing couldn't happen, not really, no to us. This was not as rough as you had led me to expect- just unfinished. The most striking incongruity for me was a new history text book- surely those would be gone too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1838442434184474812.post-91137118308167635092008-12-18T22:03:00.000-05:002008-12-18T22:03:00.000-05:00You should add another choice at the bottom: scary...You should add another choice at the bottom: scary.<BR/><BR/>Good ideas, you're right, though -- could use some revision, but a really great start.<BR/><BR/>And did I say scary?InkMomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05519976062467674531noreply@blogger.com